literature

the genesis burden

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Literature Text

there is a thunderstorm in my bones
it rattles up my spine
makes a chaotic resonance
in the cavity of my ribs

my body is a heartache
for you, the unnamed

there is a mudslide in my veins
sweeping through my vision
tumbling through my arms
building up in my legs

my body is unmoved
by you, the unknown

there is a flood in my brain
it drowns out thoughts
spills from the corners
of my cracked lips

my body is a natural disaster
to you, the unintentional

there is a drought in my heart
withering desires
scalding hopes once planted
in neat little rows of self-consciousness

my body is an amalgamation
and you, the mercurial
I will greatly multiply your sorrow and your conception...

I had a more obvious title for this, but changed it.
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Krypson's avatar
What could be better than one natural disaster? A multitude!! :la:

Very interesting analysis. I love the rhythm behind this poem, it sets a very gentle course to it and helps to further advance the reader's understanding of the words. :#1:
:iconhmm-plz: Let's see... The one thing that I feel could make this poem even better would probably be a rhyme scheme. Just something to better punctuate the beat and rhythm.

...Other than that, though, I feel that this is a most exemplary piece! :pat: Most exceptionally well done, keep it up!